I think the punishment is to prevent driving.

2023-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I think the punishment is to prevent driving. Drunk driving is a dangerous act that has given up on life, and there are several cases of injury or death. I think I should deprive my driver\'s license because I feel relieved when there are no outlaws on the road.

강사 첨삭

Hello Da [이름],

Great job on completing your homework! Your thoughts on the consequences of drunk driving are well-expressed. It\'s important to emphasize the dangers and potential harm caused by such actions. Keep up the good work!   

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think the punishment is to prevent driving.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I think they should be punished by not letting them drive.

Drunk driving is a dangerous act that has given up on life, and there are several cases of injury or death.

>>Drunk driving is a perilous behavior that endangers lives and has resulted in numerous cases of injury or death.

I think I should deprive my driver\'s license because I feel relieved when there are no outlaws on the road.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I believe I should have my driver\'s license revoked because it gives me a sense of relief when there are no reckless drivers on the road.

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