I think the school is cool!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I love school! There is my friends, teacher, and school meals. Also, I can learn about social, [이름]uage, sports, etc. A lot of subject I can learn. Although, I can\'t go school now, because of Covid Virus, but I have a lot of memories, when I was in school. One day, I went to school, there are so many friends in one place. I go there, and say, \"What\'s going here?\" then my friend said to me, \"The boys were playing soccer outside and broke the window, so one of my friends got hurt\". I got shocked, and I took my injured friend to the nurse\'s office. It was shocking and suprising enough, but it was a thrilling and fun day.
강사 첨삭
Hello Maria!
School is really cool because you will meet your life long friends there. I hope that you can go back there again soon to learn and socialize with your friends.
Thank you for another composition. This one is very well made. See you on our next essay!
-T. Donna =)
>> I love school! There I have my friends, teacher, and school meals. Also, I can learn about social science, [이름]uage, sports, etc.
A lot of subject I can learn. Although, I can\'t go school now, because of Covid Virus, but I have a lot of memories, when I was in school.
>> There are a lot of subjects I can learn. Although, I can\'t go to school now because of the Covid Virus, I have a lot of memories, when I was in school.
One day, I went to school, there are so many friends in one place. I go there, and say, \"What\'s going here?\" then my friend said to me, \"The boys were playing soccer outside and broke the window, so one of my friends got hurt\".
>> One day, I went to school and there were so many friends in one place. I went there, and said, \"What\'s going on here?\" Then my friend told me, \"The boys were playing soccer outside and broke the window.\" So one of my friends got hurt.
I got shocked, and I took my injured friend to the nurse\'s office. It was shocking and suprising enough, but it was a thrilling and fun day.
>> I got shocked, and I took my injured friend to the nurse\'s office. It was shocked and surprised enough, but it was a thrilling and fun day.
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