I think the smart phones are produced more than ever.

2018-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Phone are used not in commucation usage but a small gadget for everything. For older days, phone has a only one function that is communication. But for now, it is like a small pc. For that reason, many people from young generation to old use it for many way. In conclusion, smart phone is increasingly used, I guess. Thanks for reading. Bye.

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Thanks for doing your homework mr. [이름].

- Blair


Phone are used not in commucation usage but a small gadget for everything.
For older days, phone has a only one function that is communication.
But for now, it is like a small pc.
For that reason, many people from young generation to old use it for many way.
In conclusion, smart phone is increasingly used, I guess.


Phones are not only used for communication nowadays, it has a lot of usage.

In older days, phones are only used for communication. But for now it is like a handy PC.

For that reason, many people from young to old generations use it in many ways.

In conclusion, using of smart phones have increased.

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