I think there are lot of person who has a creative thoughts.

2018-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I like sciences. It's is interesting for kid to play indoors. I like to speak in English. Creative person is who make a new things that I want to. I bought a new wifi operated scale. In these days, people share their gift to each other. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great day ☺


I like sciences.

>> CORRECT


It\'s is interesting for kid to play indoors.

>> It\'s interesting for kids to play indoors.


I like to speak in English. 

>> I like to speak English well.


Creative person is who make a new things that I want to.

>> A creative person is the one who makes new things.


I bought a new wifi operated scale.

>> I bought a new Wi-Fi operated scale.


In these days, people share their gift to each other.

>> These days, people share their gifts to each other.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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