I think they are not good polices.

I think police is a noble job. They fight crime for others, but they get paid less. So I respect the police. But the cops I\'ve met disappoint me. They have high professional pride, but they run away when people ask for help, and there are entertainment establishments and police involved in crimes. And their actions don\'t help. This is because they know that they need a polite attitude when they ask for help. But they are always rude. That\'s why I feel uncomfortable facing the police and reluctan.

Hi Da [이름],

Great job on completing your homework! Your response discussing the noble nature of police work and sharing your observations about their actions demonstrates critical thinking and thoughtful analysis. Your thoughts and insights are valuable. By providing specific examples or anecdotes, you can further support your observations about police officers. Additionally, working on expanding your vocabulary and using synonyms will help to avoid repetitive language. For example, you could replace \"disappoint\" with \"let down\" and \"reluctant\" with \"hesitant.\" I want to commend you on expressing your ideas and concerns about the police. It takes courage to share your thoughts openly. As you continue to practice your writing skills, your ability to express your viewpoints will become even stronger. Remember, writing is a journey, and every step you take brings you closer to becoming an excellent writer in English. Keep up the great work. With dedication and perseverance, you will continue to improve and excel in English writing.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think police is a noble job.

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OR>>I think being a police officer is a noble profession.
They fight crime for others, but they get paid less.

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OR>>They work to fight crime and protect others, despite being paid less compared to some other professions.
So I respect the police.

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OR>>Therefore, I have a great deal of respect for the police.
But the cops I\'ve met disappoint me.

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OR>>However, the encounters I have had with police officers have left me disappointed.
They have high professional pride, but they run away when people ask for help, and there are entertainment establishments and police involved in crimes.

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OR>>While they possess a strong sense of professional pride, they tend to avoid helping people when asked, and there are cases where police officers are involved in crimes or connected to entertainment establishments.
And their actions don\'t help.

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OR>>Their actions do not inspire confidence or provide the assistance that is needed.
This is because they know that they need a polite attitude when they ask for help. But they are always rude.

>>This could be due to their understanding that a polite attitude is necessary when seeking help, yet they consistently display rudeness.
That\'s why I feel uncomfortable facing the police and reluctan.

>> As a result, I often feel uncomfortable and hesitant when interacting with the police.