I think university time is the happiest time of my life.

2020-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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ESSAY: What has been the best period in your life, and why? Describe the time of your life when you were the happiest, and explain why you were happiest then. Well, It is too difficult question to answer. But I just think that my university time is the nearest answer about your question. You know, before entering the university I used to be controlled or managed by teacher or parents of my attitude, life style, study and so on. But after entering the university I can feel free from all of the things which I written. So I think that university time is the best time to feel free. You can do anything you want in university time. So I think university time is the happiest time of my life.

강사 첨삭

Happy Valentines to you Sir JY~! ^^ Enjoy the day!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

ESSAY: What has been the best period in your life, and why? Describe the time of your life when you were the happiest, and explain why you were happiest then.

Well, It is too difficult question to answer.

>>> Well, it is too difficult question to answer.

But I just think that my university time is the nearest answer about your question.

>>> But I just think my university time is the nearest answer to your question.

You know, before entering the university I used to be controlled or managed by teacher or parents of my attitude, life style, study and so on.

>>> You know, before entering university, I used to be controlled or managed by my teacher or parents because of my attitude, lifestyle, studies and so on.

But after entering the university I can feel free from all of the things which I written.

>>> But after entering university, I could feel free from all of the things have said earlier.

So I think that university time is the best time to feel free.

>>> So I think that university time is the best time to be free.

You can do anything you want in university time.

>>> You can do anything you want in university.

So I think university time is the happiest time of my life.

>>>  So I think university time is the happiest time of my life.

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