I think we don\'t have to put them in the jail

If they lied, they should take punished. But I think we don\'t have to put them in the jail. Just we take get a little fine And we help them Because the state make them become members of society So I think if they lied, we\'re take fine from them And the state make them members of country.

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If they lied, they should take punished.

>>CORRECT

But I think we don\'t have to put them in the jail.

>> But I think we don\'t have to put them in jail.

Just we take get a little fine

>> Just we take to get a little fine.

And we help them

>> And we help them.

Because the state make them become members of society

>> Because the state makes them become members of society.

So I think if they lied, we\'re take fine from them

>> So, I think if they lied, we\'re taking a fine from them.

And the state make them members of country.

>> And the state makes them members of the country.