I think we get a bed habit while we are living
학생이 쓴 원문
the first when we were bone
we did\'t get any bed habit and I think the having habit is not from genetic factor
so we are learned to our friend and people who is around me
well .. I agree a little bit the people pick a bad habit up from their family
and I think that is really tiny thing so we can fix it and you should fit that for you
강사 첨삭
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Are we be born with our bad habits? Or do we acquire them from the environment surrounding us? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
the first when we were bone
we did\'t get any bed habit and I think the having habit is not from genetic factor
>>> At first when we were born we did not have bad habits and I think having habits is not from a genetic factor.
so we are learned to our friend and people who is around me
>>> So we learn from our friends and people around us.
well .. I agree a little bit the people pick a bad habit up from their family
>>> Well, I agree that some people pick up a few bad habits from their family.
and I think that is really tiny thing so we can fix it and you should fit that for you
>>> And I think that is something we can fix in a way that suits us.
Are we be born with our bad habits? Or do we acquire them from the environment surrounding us? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
the first when we were bone
we did\'t get any bed habit and I think the having habit is not from genetic factor
>>> At first when we were born we did not have bad habits and I think having habits is not from a genetic factor.
so we are learned to our friend and people who is around me
>>> So we learn from our friends and people around us.
well .. I agree a little bit the people pick a bad habit up from their family
>>> Well, I agree that some people pick up a few bad habits from their family.
and I think that is really tiny thing so we can fix it and you should fit that for you
>>> And I think that is something we can fix in a way that suits us.
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