I think when I am 90 years
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the best important that is how to care the health by myself..
and I\'m not sure I will live 90 old or not
I don\'t think that is not good that I live to long for my kids
but I also want to live long as much as I can..
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Hello there!
and I\'m not sure I will live 90 old or not
I don\'t think that is not good that I live to long for my kids
but I also want to live long as much as I can..
Thank you for answering.
Very nice answer!
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the best important that is how to care the health by myself..
>> The most important things is to care for my health by myself.
and I\'m not sure I will live 90 old or not
>>I\'m not sure if I will live to be 90 years old or not.
>>I don\'t think that it is good to live long for my kids.
>>But, I also want to live as long as I can.
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