I thought I told you it when we were in our class..
학생이 쓴 원문
I thought I told you it when we were in our class.
but I'm a good guy, so I tell you it once more.
When I got angry about something,
I need time to break which make me calm down.
A person who get angery easily makes a mistake especially their talking.
Slip of the tongue may make matter worse.
So I seek a time to rest, and When I got a time, I take a sleep.
I can think it twice during sleeping, which can make a better decision.
Of course, It is simple to speak to another person with angry sound. I agree that It can be the another way to solve my angry. but I think it is not good way. because
I don't have to 'contaminate' other people with my anger.
Try to understand other peopls' situation first, and then, I talk to them.
It is the way to deal with my anger.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thanks for another composition.
I am glad that you listen to other people first.
We need to know both sides first before doing an action.
We need to know both sides first before doing an action.
And we should always try to be calm.
Have a great day.
Have a great day.
Teacher Nina
>> I thought I told you this during our class.
but I\'m a good guy, so I tell you it once more.
but I\'m a good guy, so I tell you it once more.
>> I\'m a good guy so, I tell it to you again.
When I got angry about something, I need time to break which make me calm down.
When I got angry about something, I need time to break which make me calm down.
>> Did you mean: When I am mad about something, I need time which can calm me down.
>> OR: When I am angry about something, I need break which can help me calm down.
A person who get angery easily makes a mistake especially their talking.
A person who get angery easily makes a mistake especially their talking.
>> Did you mean: A person who gets mad easily can make a mistake especially with the words/ sentences they utter.
Slip of the tongue may make matter worse.
Slip of the tongue may make matter worse.
>> Slip of the tongue might make matter worse.
So I seek a time to rest, and When I got a time, I take a sleep.
So I seek a time to rest, and When I got a time, I take a sleep.
>> So I seek time to rest and sleep.
I can think it twice during sleeping, which can make a better decision.
>> Did you mean: I can think about it twice after sleeping, which can lead to a better decision.
I can think it twice during sleeping, which can make a better decision.
>> Did you mean: I can think about it twice after sleeping, which can lead to a better decision.
>> OR: After taking a rest, I can think about it more which can lead to a better decision.
Of course, It is simple to speak to another person with angry sound.
>> Did you mean: Of course, it is simple to talk to another person in a high tone voice.
>> OR: Of course, it is easy to talk to another person with an angry voice.
I agree that It can be the another way to solve my angry. but I think it is not good way.
>> I agree that there is another way to solve my anger but I think it is not in a good way.
because I don\'t have to \'contaminate\' other people with my anger.
>> Because I don\'t have to vent out my anger to other people.
>> Because I don\'t have to vent out my anger to other people.
Try to understand other peopls\' situation first, and then, I talk to them.
>> I try to understand other people\'s situation first and then I talk to them.
It is the way to deal with my anger
It is the way to deal with my anger
>> Correct
>> OR: It is the best way to deal with my anger.
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