I took the first class

2010-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 rich

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I took the first class and i believe this class will help my english speaking skill. also today was pretty helpful. anyway, when I talked with counselor (i'm not sure who is he.. maybe counselor? manager? i guess..), he said i should give you information about the university where I want to go. because,,as you know,, I'm actually preparing for the english interview to enter the university. so I roughly made the file.... which contains the information. please let me know the e-mail address so i can send this file.

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I took the first class and i believe this class will help my english speaking skill.also today was pretty helpful.anyway, when I talked with counselor (i'm not sure who is he.. maybe counselor? manager? i guess..), he said i should give you information about the university where I want to go. because,,as you know,, I'm actually preparing for the english interview to enter the university.so I roughly made the file.... which contains the information.please let me know the e-mail address so i can send this file.     Hi [이름]!!  I'm happy to check your composition. Keep sending and keep learning. Here are the corrections made........   I took the first class and i believe this class will help my english speaking skill.>>> I have taken this class because I believe this class/program will help my English speaking skill.   also today was pretty helpful. >>> Today, it was pretty helpful. (GREAT!!!) anyway, when I talked with counselor (i'm not sure who is he.. maybe counselor? manager? i guess..), he said i should give you information about the university where I want to go. because,,as you know,, I'm actually preparing for the english interview to enter the university. >>> Anyway, when I talked to the manager, he said, I should give you information about the university where I want to go. As you know, I'm actually preparing for the English interview that will be given before entering the university.    so I roughly made the file.... which contains the information. >>> So, I hardly made a file which contains the information. please let me know the e-mail address so i can send this file.   VERY GOOD! ( Email add? can you just send it here in the composition site? kkk ) [이메일]    I told you, you're English is great! Now, enhance more on your speaking....ok? by the way, you can send the file here: [이메일]  

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