I took the first class
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I took the first class and i believe this class will help my english speaking skill.
also today was pretty helpful.
anyway, when I talked with counselor (i'm not sure who is he.. maybe counselor? manager? i guess..), he said i should give you information about the university where I want to go. because,,as you know,, I'm actually preparing for the english interview to enter the university.
so I roughly made the file.... which contains the information.
please let me know the e-mail address so i can send this file.
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I took the first class and i believe this class will help my english speaking skill.also today was pretty helpful.anyway, when I talked with counselor (i'm not sure who is he.. maybe counselor? manager? i guess..), he said i should give you information about the university where I want to go. because,,as you know,, I'm actually preparing for the english interview to enter the university.so I roughly made the file.... which contains the information.please let me know the e-mail address so i can send this file.
Hi [이름]!!
I'm happy to check your composition. Keep sending and keep learning.
Here are the corrections made........
I took the first class and i believe this class will help my english speaking skill.>>> I have taken this class because I believe this class/program will help my English speaking skill.
also today was pretty helpful.
>>> Today, it was pretty helpful. (GREAT!!!)
anyway, when I talked with counselor (i'm not sure who is he.. maybe counselor? manager? i guess..), he said i should give you information about the university where I want to go. because,,as you know,, I'm actually preparing for the english interview to enter the university.
>>> Anyway, when I talked to the manager, he said, I should give you information about the university where I want to go. As you know,
I'm actually preparing for the English interview that will be given before entering the university.
so I roughly made the file.... which contains the information.
>>> So, I hardly made a file which contains the information.
please let me know the e-mail address so i can send this file.
VERY GOOD!
( Email add? can you just send it here in the composition site? kkk ) [이메일]
I told you, you're English is great! Now, enhance more on your speaking....ok? by the way, you can send the file here: [이메일]
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