I travelled Suanbo city in Korea with my family.

I travelled Suanbo city in Korea with my family. Suanbo is famous for the hot spring ("Oncheon" in Korea) There is the hot spring, lake, dam near Suanbo. We travelled the Chungju Dam, the Chungju Lake at afternoon, and then we visited the Suanbo Oncheon at night. Because we tired very much, we relaxed in hot spring. On our way home, we dropped in the valley, we have a happy time. I wanted to eat a Lamyun, Korean noodle, in the valley, I could not do it. Unfortunately, cooking is prohibited in the valley. Ten years ago, it is accepted. Nowdays, it is prohibited strictly for nature conservation. Is it accepted in Phillipine? Then I will go to there with the bunner, kocher ^^

Hi [이름]!!   Your trip with your family sounds like a lot of fun.. I have never been to a hot spring before because it is very far from where I am living right now… But I would love to try it.. How does it feel to take a bath in a hot spring? ^^ Anyway, to answer your question, I think cooking is allowed but campers have to make sure that they put out the fire before leaving so as not to cause a forest fire..   See you tomorrow!! ^_^   T. Shy   Here are my corrections:   I travelled Suanbo city in Korea with my family.>> I travelled to Suanbo City in Korea with my family. There is the hot spring, lake, dam near Suanbo.>> There is a hot spring, lake, and a dam near Suanbo.We travelled the Chungju Dam, the Chungju Lake at afternoon,>> We travelled to the Chungju Dam, and to the Chungju Lake in the afternoon, Because we tired very much, we relaxed in hot spring.>> Because we tired very much, we relaxed in hot spring. >> Because we were tired very much, we relaxed in the hot spring. On our way home, we dropped in the valley,>> On our way home, we dropped by the valley,we have a happy time.>> we had a happy time. Ten years ago, it is accepted. >> Ten years ago, it was accepted. Nowdays, it is prohibited strictly for nature conservation.>> Nowadays, it is prohibited strictly for nature conservation. Is it accepted in Phillipine?>> Is it accepted in Philippines?Then I will go to there with the bunner, kocher ^^ >> Then I will go there with the a burner and a  cooker..  ^^ (I’m not really sure what you mean here but I think ‘bunner’ is ‘burner’ and according to our class, you must mean a cooker.. ^_^)