I treat my family more valuable than strangers.
학생이 쓴 원문
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Todays weather is fine.
>> Today\'s weather is fine.
>> OR: The weather today is fine.
it is somehow cold though.
>> It is somehow cold though.
I regard that I love my family.
>> I have the greatest regard for my family.
I live in kwangju where it has some memorial park.
>> I live in Kwangju where you can find Memorial Parks.
Some foreign english teachers are passing by me in the street.
>> Some foreign English teachers usually pass by me on the sidewalk.
I can contact with them more easily at multi media.
>> I can contact them much easier on social media.
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>> CORRECT
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