I treat my family more valuable than strangers.

2018-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

Todays weather is fine. it is somehow cold though. I regard that I love my family. I live in kwangju where it has some memorial park. Some foreign english teachers are passing by me in the street. I can contact with them more easily at multi media. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great day ☺

Talk to you later ☻


Todays weather is fine.

>> Today\'s weather is fine.

>> OR: The weather today is fine.


it is somehow cold though.

>> It is somehow cold though.


I regard that I love my family.
>> I have the greatest regard for my family.


I live in kwangju where it has some memorial park.

>> I live in Kwangju where you can find Memorial Parks.


Some foreign english teachers are passing by me in the street.

>> Some foreign English teachers usually pass by me on the sidewalk.


I can contact with them more easily at multi media.

>> I can contact them much easier on social media.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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