I tried to learn kendo called other word as japanese fencing
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I tried to learn kendo called other word as japanese fencing when I was 20 years old
I can\'t fix to my step for doing kendo so I quit.
and To learn the kendo need a lot of money. that time I was young I was poor so that is second reason I quit
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Hi, [이름]. Thank you for sharing your experience in learning kendo. Maybe, the timing was not right and you can try learning kendo again in the future.^^ I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on the topic. Have a great weekend! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I tried to learn kendo called other word as japanese fencing when I was 20 years old
>>> I tried to learn kendo, which is also called Japanese fencing when I was 20 years old.
I can\'t fix to my step for doing kendo so I quit.
>>> I could not follow the positions of kendo so I quit.
and To learn the kendo need a lot of money.
>>> And learning kendo needs a lot of money. / And learning kendo is expensive.
that time I was young I was poor so that is second reason I quit
>>> At that time, I was young and poor so that is the second reason I quit.
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