I use my computer as my private thing.

2019-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I use my computer for translating the english manuscript into korean. These days I use my computer irregularly than usual days. I use cellular phone more than computer because it is more simple to use. I have my computer in my room but I often go out to PC room to play the PC. Todays weather is fine. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night. ☺

I use my computer for translating the english manuscript into korean.

>> I use my computer for translating the English manuscript into Korean.

These days I use my computer irregularly than usual days.

>> I sometimes use my computer these days than the usual.

I use cellular phone more than computer because it is more simple to use.

>> I use my cellphone more than I use my computer because it is so simple to use.

I have my computer in my room but I often go out to PC room to play the PC.

>> I have my computer in my room but I often go to the PC room.

Todays weather is fine.

>> Today\'s weather is fine.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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