I usually don\'t drink anything except water.
학생이 쓴 원문
Drinking is not a good habit.
I seldom drink wine that I buy at cake store.
Instead of drinking for celebratin I used to smoke.
I smoke a day one pack of cigarette.
I rest home all day long.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]. Thank you for your effort in doing your homework. Keep up the good work!^_^
I seldom drink wine that I buy at cake store.
>>>I seldom drink wine that I buy at a cake store.
Instead of drinking for celebratin I used to smoke.
>>>Instead of drinking for a celebration, I used to smoke.
I smoke a day one pack of cigarette.
>>>I smoke one pack of cigarette a day.
I rest home all day long.
>>>I rest at home all day long.
OR>>>I rest in my home all day long.
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