I usually get moody at nights or dawn.
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually get moody and emotional when It is dawn or night.
Because I am too busy in the morning to think about something.
but after I finish all my work, i have some leisure time to think about or come up with something.
When I have a time to think, I come up with the past affair or some accidents or ex-boyfriend.
I sometimes regret and had difficulty time reminiscing.
But i am trying not to regret the past.
because I cannot change the thing which is not present.
so I will do my best on what I can change.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Juliet! Thank you so much for your thoughts regarding this topics. I appreciate it.
Sincerely
T. James
I usually get moody and emotional when It is dawn or night.
>>> CORRECT
Because I am too busy in the morning to think about something.
>>> CORRECT
but after I finish all my work, i have some leisure time to think about or come up with something.
>>> But after I finish all my work, I have some leisure time to think about or come up with something.
When I have a time to think, I come up with the past affair or some accidents or ex-boyfriend.
>>> When I have time to think, I come up with a past affair or some accidents or ex-boyfriend.
I sometimes regret and had difficulty time reminiscing.
>>> CORRECT
But i am trying not to regret the past.
>>> But I am trying not to regret the past.
because I cannot change the thing which is not present.
>>> CORRECT
So I will do my best on what I can change.
>>> CORRECT
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