I usually have a two or three hours every day for my own time

2020-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

I have been spending one or two hours for developing myself every day that time is only for me I have been to do learning English and learning Japan language. and I have more free time on every weekend for me What I have weekend is not learning or lecture that is only for throwing up a stress

강사 첨삭

Hey, [이름]. Happy Thursday! Thank you for making an effort in this homework. You did really well and you should be proud. I hope this weekend you will have all the free time you need for yourself. Have a good evening. ~Teacher Jane c\",)


I have been spending one or two hours for developing myself every day that time is only for me
>> I have been spending one or two hours developing myself every day that time is only for me.

I have been to do learning English and learning Japan language.
>> I have been learning English and learning the Japanese language.

and I have more free time on every weekend for me
>> And I have more free time every weekend for me.

What I have weekend is not learning or lecture
>> What I have on the weekend is not learning or lecture.

that is only for throwing up a stress
>> That is for throwing up stress.

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