I usually use expressions from our book regarding helping!

2025-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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As I told you that our team members are doing the same tasks: investigating income and asset of people who want to receive subsidy. So our team members and I usually help each other when some member get a problem with difficult cases. Yesterday I argued with my client. She appeal that her financial situation is not good, so she want to receive subsidy right now. But I insisted it was impossible. So, after the call with her, I asked for help to one of my team members, using expressions like \"Can you help me out?\" Also other team members asked me the cases that they can\'t solve by themselves, using expressions like \"Can you help me out, [이름]?\"

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]!

I am so glad to see you here on the composition site! I am not quite sure if this is the first time but I hope that this is not the last. ^^

Some recipients of help are offered a hand but want your whole arm or body. In short, the reliance of some people from the government\'s subsidy fosters complacency and entitlement. However, that should not be the case. Moreover, they have to be courteous in asking you favors because you have the power to recommend their increase in case they deserve it.

Keep your cool and do what is right.

Below, there are some suggestions in improving some parts of your sentences. Read and understand them carefully. Overall, you are a very good writer! See you on the next composition!

-T. Donna~

>>> As I told you, our team members are doing the same tasks: investigating income and asset of people who want to receive subsidy.
So our team members and I usually help each other when some members get/have a problem with difficult cases.

Yesterday I argued with my client. She appeal that her financial situation is not good, so she want to receive subsidy right now. But I insisted it was impossible.
So, after the call with her, I asked for help to one of my team members, using expressions like \"Can you help me out?\"

>>> Yesterday I argued with my client. She appealed that her financial situation is not good, so she wanted to receive subsidy immediately. But I insisted it was impossible.
So, after the call with her, I asked for help from one of my team members, using expressions like \"Can you help me out?\"

Also other team members asked me the cases that they can\'t solve by themselves, using expressions like \"Can you help me out, [이름]?\"

>>> Also, other team members asked me the cases that they can\'t solve by themselves, using expressions like \"Can you help me out, [이름]?\"

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