I've been tired and sick.

2013-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Hi, teacher. I would like to go back home after having lunch. Before that, I will go to the 12 floors where phamacy is located, and see a doctor. And then, I'm gonna work by 5 pm if it is getting better. I hope to get better for work hard cause I'm a fresh researcher who should do ever my best. As you told me in a board, you asked me to think and say what I see. 1. I`m typping things that are needed to steer me. 2. For that, I'm seeing what marchandises are placed on my table. 3. A lot of electronic goods are placed on my table. 4. First of all, on the left of my sight, some books are arranged in a line. 5. Next to them on the right, some drip coffees that were given by my girl friend are also placed. She gave me those which don't include any prim cause she knows that I've had a allergy reaction. 6. Some people are passing by me as soon as the time starting work is comming at 8:00. 7. Several people of them said me that you'd better go home to take a rest. 8. I have a appointment with our new freshmen who I met after starting software training. 9. I send a e-mail to all of them to say hello by having a lunch. That time is today lunch. Thank you teacher... I hope to be getting better tommorow.

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Take care of yourself [이름]. Getting sick will cost you money so always look after yourself. I hope you\'d get better by tomorrow as well. Talk soon! T. Aurora Hi, teacher. >>Hi teacher. I would like to go back home after having lunch.>>Correct!Before that, I will go to the 12 floors where phamacy is located, and see a doctor.>>Before that, I will go to the 12th floor where the phamacy is located, and see a doctor.And then, I\'m gonna work by 5 pm if it is getting better.>>And then, I\'m gonna work by 5 pm if it will get better.I hope to get better for work hard cause I\'m a fresh researcher who should do ever my best.>>I hope to get better to work hard cause I\'m a fresh researcher who should do my best.As you told me in a board, you asked me to think and say what I see. >>As you told me on my feedback, I have to think and say what I see. 1. I`m typping things that are needed to steer me. >>I`m typing things that are needed to steer me.2. For that, I\'m seeing what marchandises are placed on my table. >> I\'m looking at what merchandises are placed on my table. >>I\'m looking at the merchandises placed on my table.3. A lot of electronic goods are placed on my table. >>Correct! >>A lot of electronic goods are on my table.4. First of all, on the left of my sight, some books are arranged in a line. >>On the left side of my table, there are some books which are arranged in a line.5. Next to them on the right, some drip coffees that were given by my girl friend are also placed. >>Correct! She gave me those which don\'t include any prim cause she knows that I\'ve had a allergy reaction. >>She gave me those without prim cause she knows that I\'ve had an allergic reaction to it before.. 6. Some people are passing by me as soon as the time starting work is comming at 8:00. >>Some people are passing by me especially since it\'s about time to start work. >>It\'s about 8:00 and there are several people passing by me.7. Several people of them said me that you\'d better go home to take a rest. >>Several of them told me that I\'d better go home to take a rest.8. I have a appointment with our new freshmen who I met after starting software training. >>I have an appointment with our new freshmen who I met after starting the software training.9. I send a e-mail to all of them to say hello by having a lunch. That time is today lunch.>>I sent an e-mail to all of them to say hello and to join me for lunch later today. Thank you teacher... I hope to be getting better tommorow. >>ThanK you teacher. I hope to get better tomorrow.

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