i've got different answers from 2 teachers.

2011-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Melyna

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A.I'm expecting a degree of Bachelor of Environment and Forest Resources from Cheongnam national university after one and a half year. B.I'm expecting to have a degree of Bachelor of Environment and Forest Resources in Cheongnam International university afeter one and a half year. A. I always thought that I would work in a field that is beneficial for our society. B. I have always thought that I will work in a field that will be beneficial for our society Both A and B answers came from powerenglish teachers but it seems different. so i'm confused. if both ansewrs correct, please pick a more common answer.

강사 첨삭

Helo Jo!!! You are doing great with your answers and you have excellent use of your lexical resources in the right context. Superb!!!I had checked your grammar for your answers last night, listened to it, and I was able to look upon minimal grammatical errorrs. I wrote it in your grammatical errors last night and planned to diccuss it with you.Supposedly I will be having the feedback with you tonight for the evaluation, but since you're query is about the feedback, then I will give the corrections now...^^~~***   As far as I can remember, sentences "A" were your answers and sentences "B" would be the most grammatically correct anwers.   We will look into detail about the corrections.   A.I'm expecting a degree of Bachelor of Environment and Forest Resources from Cheongnam national university after one and a half year. CORRECT>>>I'm expecting TO HAVE a degree of Bachelor of Environment and Forest Resources IN Cheongnam International university after one and a half year.          >>>Sentence B is much better since your prepositional phrase "TO HAVE" is showing ownership. That is why in spoken  English, if you are talking about your major, you would say, "I HAVE a degree of Bachelor of Environment and Forest Resources which I took in Cheongnam National University."          >>>Also the preposition IN is more appropriate because FROM is used to indicate a transfer from one place to another. But you did not transfer from Cheongnam International university to anther university  to study, rather, you studied IN there. For the next sentence, Sentence A or B is either correct. It depends on the thought you want to express. But in sentence B, instead of saying "I will work in a field that WILL be beneficial for our society", it's more FACTUAL if you will say "I will work in a field that IS be beneficial for our society".   CORRECT>>>A. I always thought that I would work in a field that is beneficial for our society. Since THOUGHT is the past tense of THINK, then this means that some time in the PAST you had thought of working in a field that is beneficial for our society, but NOW you think otherwise. So you may use this sentence if what you ought to express is the latter idea. CORRECT>>>B. I have always thought that I will work in a field that IS beneficial for our society.Since you use PRESENT PERFECT, this means that some time in the past upto the present time, you are still thinking of working in a field that is beneficial for our society.   If you have more questions, or clarifications, just let me know and I will always be here to help you. God bless bless you!!!...^^~~*** T. Melyna

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