I've got my first class-

2010-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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hi- my name is kim- l was filled out resister sheet yasterday,then I've got my first class today-(pattern english 1) wow- actually it was little difficult time to me and lwas nervous during the classㅠ.. l'll never nervous next time- :) lf l wear study hard,l'll gonna good change to improve my english skil i've learnd english since midding,but l can't speake english well,even survival english too. l think almost korean having a trouble with speak english. English is one of the best imprtant thing that empolers wanted so every korean have to study hard through all life lt's little sad atmosphere... i hope power english and my teacher lei help me to improve my english. i can do me best way- someday l want to talk naturally with native speakers. :) thank you-

강사 첨삭

Hi Kim!! Yeah, I know that studying English is quite hard and it takes some time to master it. Your skills are good; you just need to keep on practicing for you to master it. Always be confident and be patient. Thank you for sending a composition. Always, have a great day!! Lei J my name is kim- >>Correctl was filled out resister sheet yasterday, >>I registered yesterday then I've got my first class today-(pattern english 1)>>And I had my first class today, my book is Pattern English 1wow- actually it was little difficult time to me and lwas nervous during the classㅠ..>>Wow! Honestly, I was a little hard for me and I was nervous during the classl'll never nervous next time- :) >>I'm not going to be nervous next time Jlf l wear study hard,l'll gonna good change to improve my english skil>>Studying hard will be a good chance to improve my English skillsi've learned english since midding,but l can't speake english well,even survival english too.>>I've been studying Englsih since middle school, but I still can't speak English that well and even surviving from itl think almost korean having a trouble with speak english. >>I think almost all Koeans are having troubles speaking in EnglishEnglish is one of the best imprtant thing that empolers wanted >>Knowing how to communicate in English is one of the most important skills that an employer demandsso every korean have to study hard through all life >>So every Korean needs to study English even if it takes a life time.lt's little sad atmosphere...>>It's a little sad atmospherei hope power english and my teacher lei help me to improve my english. >>I hope Power English and my teacher will be able to help me improve my skillsi can do me best way- someday l want to talk naturally with native speakers. :)>>I will do my best so that someday I can talk in a natural way with native speakersthank you- >>Correct

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