I've got to see you a few days later

2014-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hey Debby :) As I've always asked, how was your weekend? I spent whole days in my home. I got a pain in my feet, so I didn't go t execise since 4 days ago. By the way, I've got to postpone the classes to see my relatives. I'm going to go to Changwon and then Seoul, the capital of Korea. So I'm going to leave early to get on a bus for Changwon. And after meeting my relatives, we're going to go Seoul. Maybe it will be a final trip before the vacation ends. So let's see on the next weekend. Take care :D <Essay> What is free speech exactly? If it means statements, I think so. Because we shoudn't speak comfortably what I want to say and it needs a lot of ability like courage, confidence, etc. It's a quiet hard especially for people like me. How about you? :)

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Hello [이름]!^^ I hope you called my managers to postpone the class. That\'s the rule. I think you forgot!^^ hahahaha Anyways, I\'m writing back and I hope you get this even if you are on vacation. \"FREE SPEECH\" means the freedom to say anything anywhere, to anybody anyhow. It\'s the freedom to speak your mind. A lot of people say that it is our right but downright honesty can be rude or hurtful sometimes. I do believe in freedom of speech but I think that speaking manners are more important!^^ Enjoy your trip!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hey Debby :)>> CORRECT OR> Hi Debby^^As I\'ve always asked, how was your weekend? >> CORRECT OR> Normally I am always asked how my weekend was. I spent whole days in my home. >> CORRECT OR> I spent a lot of my days at home. I got a pain in my feet, so I didn\'t go t execise since 4 days ago. >>  I got a pain in my feet, so I didn\'t  execise since 4 days ago. By the way, I\'ve got to postpone the classes to see my relatives. >> CORRECT OR> I might not be in class for a while.I\'m going to go to Changwon and then Seoul, the capital of Korea. >> CORRECT OR> I will be in Changwon and in Seoul, the capital of Korea. So I\'m going to leave early to get on a bus for Changwon. >> CORRECT OR> I will be in a bus in a while for Changwon.And after meeting my relatives, we\'re going to go Seoul. >> CORRECT OR> We will head to Seoul after meeting with ou relatives.Maybe it will be a final trip before the vacation ends.>> CORRECT OR> It might be my final trip before vacation ends.So let\'s see on the next weekend. >> So let\'s see each other on the next weekend.Take care :D>> CORRECT<Essay>What is free speech exactly? >> CORRECT OR> What do you mean by free speech?If it means statements, I think so. >> CORRECT OR> If you meant statements, then I think so. Because we shoudn\'t speak comfortably what I want to say and it needs a lot of ability like courage, confidence, etc. >>  Because we shoudn\'t speak what we want to say comfortably and it needs a lot of ability like courage, confidence, etc. It\'s a quiet hard especially for people like me. >> It\'s a quite hard especially for people like me. How about you? :) >> CORRECT OR> What do you think?

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