I've had problem these days.

2012-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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Hello. Sorry for missing the class. I was really sick yesterday. I couldn't even move my body. I slept all day long... I think it was because of the weather and irregular live pattern. I needed to excercise but I just studied all day. When you called me, I was sleeping. I wanna ask a favor of you. In this week, I wish I could rest my body all the time. So I want to skip our homework this week. I'm so tired and don't have a good condition. I really need some rest. My school will starts next week. So I have to lift up my condition. You know.. My health is not as good as other people. Just one more notice. We will have class next week, monday and wendesday. Unluckily, My basketball club has a contest next week (monday, tuesday, wendesday) And the game time is in the evening. I'm really sorry but I can't get your call next week except friday. It was helpless. Anyway I can get your call today. See you!

강사 첨삭

Hi^^ Wow, thanks for explaining in detail, that\'s life when it rains it pours kk. I understand your predicament and don\'t you worry I\'d still be here waiting for you in our class time. Take care of yourself!^^ T\' Sheela Hello. >> CORRECT! Sorry for missing the class. >> CORRECT! I was really sick yesterday. >> CORRECT! I couldn\'t even move my body. >> CORRECT! I slept all day long... >> CORRECT! I think it was because of the weather and irregular live pattern. >> I think it was because of the weather and my irregular routine. I needed to excercise but I just studied all day. >> I needed to exercise but I just studied all day. When you called me, I was sleeping. >> CORRECT! I wanna ask a favor of you. >>I wanna ask a favor from you. In this week, I wish I could rest my body all the time. So I want to skip our homework this week >> This week, I wish I could rest my body all the time so I want to skip our homework this week. I\'m so tired and don\'t have a good condition. >>I\'m so tired and I\'m not in a good condition. I really need some rest. >> CORRECT!My school will starts next week. So I have to lift up my condition >>My school will start next week so I have to boost my body\'s condition. . You know.. My health is not as good as other people. >> You know, my health is not as good as other people. Just one more notice. We will have class next week, monday and wendesday. >>Just one more notice, we will be having our class next week, Monday and Wednesday. Unluckily, My basketball club has a contest next week (monday, tuesday, wendesday) And the game time is in the evening. >>Unluckily, my basketball club has a contest next week (Monday , Tuesday and Wednesday) and the game is scheduled in the evening.I\'m really sorry but I can\'t get your call next week except friday. >> I\'m really sorry but I can\'t receive your call next week except for Friday. It was helpless. >> It was inevitable.Anyway I can get your call today. >> Anyway, I can get your call today. See you! >> CORRECT!

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