I've lost a friend.

2011-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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Two years ago, I worked at an english academy as a part time job to go abroad. There were three foreign teachers, one of whom was a british. We've kept in touch since then, but I thought we weren't close. We contacted just under ten times by mail or facebook. We haven't ever seen for two years. Last Friday he let me know his phone number on facebook. I texted to him to give my number. And he had no idea to stop texting and saying strangely all the day. He talk about what time to meet, he would treat me and hope to date like that. I told him that we could meet someday but I didn't wanna meet anybody before getting a job. When I talked about this with my friend, she also thought of the same thing as mine that it was a little weird. And I felt terrible on next day of the day.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! So that British guy likes you? Why do you need to have a job first? I think just let it be, meet him if you could and the others will come next! This is a chance of a lifetime!! Haha! -Tiny^0^ Two years ago, I worked at an english academy as a part time job to go abroad. >>correct >>Two years ago, I worked at an English academy as a part time job to go abroad. There were three foreign teachers, one of whom was a british. >>correct >> There were three foreign teachers, one of whom was a British. We've kept in touch since then, but I thought we weren't close. >>correctWe contacted just under ten times by mail or facebook. >>correct We haven't ever seen for two years. >> We haven't ever seen each other for two years. Last Friday he let me know his phone number on facebook. >>correctI texted to him to give my number. >>correctAnd he had no idea to stop texting and saying strangely all the day. >> And he had no idea to stop texting and saying things strangely all the day. He talk about what time to meet, he would treat me and hope to date like that. >> He talk about what time we would meet, he would treat me and hope to date like that. I told him that we could meet someday but I didn't wanna meet anybody before getting a job. >>correct (Haha!)When I talked about this with my friend, she also thought of the same thing as mine that it was a little weird. >>correctAnd I felt terrible on next day of the day. >> And I felt terrible on the next day.

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