I\'ve never met anyone enough to influence decisions and actions.

2024-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

I don\'t put my decision off to anyone. Also, I think the only person who influences my behavior is my mother who raised my childhood. Of course, what I need to fix is heard from acquaintances around me and try to fix it if I think it\'s reasonable. But I don\'t think that they have influenced my values.

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름],

Your words about decision-making show wisdom beyond your years. Trusting your own judgment is a sign of maturity and strength. While considering advice from others, you stay true to your values. This integrity sets you apart. Continue to follow your instincts, Da [이름]. Your authenticity is truly inspiring.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I don\'t put my decision off to anyone.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I make my decisions independently.

Also, I think the only person who influences my behavior is my mother who raised my childhood.

>>Also, I think the only person who influenced my behavior is my mother who raised my childhood.

Of course, what I need to fix is heard from acquaintances around me and try to fix it if I think it\'s reasonable.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Of course, I pay attention to feedback from acquaintances and make changes if I find it reasonable.

But I don\'t think that they have influenced my values.

>>CORRECT

OR>>However, I don\'t believe that they have had an influence on my values.

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