I visit grandmother's house

2014-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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I visited grandmother's house. I'm watched TV. But I studied English. Because of my mom. It was so sad. I can't watch TV all times.

강사 첨삭

Hello there !

How are you doing today?

Thanks for the homework?

Are these the things you did last weekend? :)

For me , I had fun!!!

I want to hear more stories from you in class later.

~~T. Chloe^^

 I visited grandmother\'s house.

>>I visited my grandmother.

>>I went to my grandmother\'s house.
I\'m watched TV.

>>I watched TV.

But I studied English. Because of my mom.

>>But I studied English because of my mom.
It was so sad.

>>Correct!
I can\'t watch TV all times.

>>I can\'t watch TV all the time.

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