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olleh~! my frineds and I were happy. because my curriculum had been over! and It means we have to back to work place. and It means to me I will get a new companies! HQ sent me a document that every classmate's place to go was written. My place is Chung ju much far from here. so I decided I would get a appointment with my friend. we had deal when I carry him on his house, he gives me accomodation. and we talked each other over 4 a.m!!!! It was great. I was little tired the next day. but It deserved it. went down carry on brought up keep off broke down 1. We cannot play football here. The sign says, ' keep off the grass.' 2. She break down and cried. 3. The boy was _brought up by a nanny. 4. The Titanic collided with an iceberg and _went down_. 5. Why don't you _carry on_ singing? You have such a beautiful voice.:

Hi there again [이름] ^^ You did an awesome job with your homework. I think it was easy for you, am I right? You are really a good friend. Talking to you is really worthit. Your ideas were great! I think we can talk more about your corrections in class so that you will be able to understand it. I will be glad to explain it to you. Thank you for sharing beautiful stories tonight. See you tomorrow! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: olleh~! my frineds and I were happy. >> My friends and I were happy.because my curriculum had been over! >> Because our curriculum is over.and It means we have to back to work place. >> It means that we have to go back to our workplace.and It means to me I will get a new companies! >> It means that I will get a job in different companies.HQ sent me a document that every classmate\'s place to go was written. >> HQ sent me a document that we have to discuss in a written form about our classmate\'s place.My place is Chung ju much far from here. >> My place is in Chung ju much farther from here. so I decided I would get a appointment with my friend. >> So I decided to have an appointment with my friend.we had deal when I carry him on his house, he gives me accomodation. >> Did you mean: We had a deal that if I will help him to carry his things to his house, he will accommodate me.and we talked each other over 4 a.m!!!! >> We talked until four o\'clock in the morning.It was great. I was little tired the next day. >> Correct!but It deserved it.>> But I deserve it.went down carry on brought up keep off broke down1. We cannot play football here. The sign says, \' keep off the grass.\' >> Correct!2. She break down and cried. >> She broke down and cried.3. The boy was _brought up by a nanny. >> Correct!4. The Titanic collided with an iceberg and _went down_. >> Correct!5. Why don\'t you _carry on_ singing? You have such a beautiful voice.: >> Correct!