I wanna give you a book not on-line.

2017-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello teacher! How was your yesterday? I had good time. I wanna send a book not on-line. If I send a book of [이름]e , could you send me a book of yours ? I am interested in books, but I read them again and again. I do like English book . When I was 20s and 30s , I read many English book. ..... Now I am trying to read the informations with Book. ..... From your a student in Korea [이름][이름]

강사 첨삭



Hello there, Arthur!

Thanks for dropping by to send a composition.

I am a bookworm!

I\'ve always been fascinated with books.

I was able to improve my English skill through reading a variety of fiction novels.

I have a lot of books that I could recommend to you.

Let\'s talk about them later in our class. :)

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

Hello teacher!
>> CORRECT!
How was your yesterday?
>> How was your day yesterday?
I had good time.
>> I had a good time.
I wanna send a book not on-line.
>> I want to send you a book, but not online.
If I send a book of [이름]e, could you send me a book of yours?
>> CORRECT!
I am interested in books, but I read them again and again.
>> CORRECT!
I do like English books.
>> CORRECT!
When I was 20s and 30s , I read many English book.
>> When I was in my 20s and 30s, I read many English books.
Now I am trying to read the informations with Book.
>> Now, I am trying to read informative books.

OR:
>> I am trying to read books with information now.

From your a student in Korea

>> From your student in Korea,
[이름][이름]

>> CORRECT!

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