I want a tiger for a pet
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If I have a pet, I will have a tiger.Because Jasmine has a tiger too,in aladdin movie.
And a tiger is very strong so it guard for me from thief.
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If I have a pet, I will have a tiger.
>> If I could have a pet, it would be a tiger.
Because Jasmine has a tiger too,in aladdin movie.
>> Because Jasmine has a tiger too, in the Aladdin movie.
And a tiger is very strong so it guard for me from thief.
>> And a tiger is very strong so it can guard me and my home against thieves.
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