I want durian
학생이 쓴 원문
If I were fruit that is durian. Because it\'s not favor good and it has bad smell, so I can live all life. So I want durian because I want live all life.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Durian is an interesting choice. I just want to say that for me, durian\'s taste is delicious. ^-^
It\'s not as bad as what many people think. Have you tried it?
Thank you so much for answering your homework. I will see you in class tomorrow.
Have a good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
If I were fruit that is durian.
>>> If I were a fruit, that would be durian.
Because it\'s not favor good and it has bad smell, so I can live all life.
>>> It\'s because it\'s not so yummy and it has a bad smell; thus, I can live all my life.
So I want durian because I want live all life.
>>> So I chose durian because I want to live a long life.
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