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I want friends are listen other friends opinions. Second they don\'t make much stress. Third they hobby is similar my hobby. Finally they don\'t think only themselves.
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I want friends are listen other friends opinions.
>> First, I want a friend who likes listening to the opinions of others.
Second they don\'t make much stress.
>> Second, I want a friend who doesn\'t cause too much stress.
Third they hobby is similar my hobby.
>> Third, I want a friend who has the same hobby as me.
Finally they don\'t think only themselves.
>> Finally, I want someone who is not selfish and loves taking care of other people.
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