I want more job.
학생이 쓴 원문
In January, I\'m just resting and playing.
Usually every month my schedule is changing.
And I have a many kind of job but now, I don\'t have a work now.
When I do not working, I\'m very nervous.
These day, a lot of cases covid19 virus and do not come out to audition.
And just waiting, I think I should found other job.
I don\'t want to rest like zombie at home:(
This year, I will be have a lot of work please!
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
That\'s okay. With you talents, you can find a job very easily.
In January, I\'m just resting and playing.
>> This January, I will just rest and play.
Usually every month my schedule is changing.
>> Usually my schedule changes every month.
And I have a many kind of job but now, I don\'t have a work now.
>> And I have many kinds of jobs but now, I don\'t have any.
When I do not working, I\'m very nervous.
>> I get nervous when I don\'t work.
These day, a lot of cases covid19 virus and do not come out to audition.
>> There are a lot of COVID-19 viruses these days so I can\'t go on auditions.
And just waiting, I think I should found other job.
>> I should just wait and find another kind of job.
I don\'t want to rest like zombie at home:(
>> CORRECT
This year, I will be have a lot of work please!
>> I am looking forward to have a lot of jobs this year, please.
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