I want to accomplish...
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I want to have a hamster.
2. I want to sleep in my mom\'s bed with my mom.
3. I want to have good relationship with my friend.
4. I want to get good score in my test.
5. I want try eating 엽기 떡볶이.
There are also other many things I want to accomplish.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ella! Wow! You have a lot of things you want to accomplish. Good job! Let this list be your motivation to do well in your studies and maybe your mom can grant one each time you do well.
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
2. I want to sleep in my mom\'s bed with my mom.
>>CORRECT
3. I want to have good relationship with my friend.
3. I want to have good relationship with my friend.
>>I want to have a good relationship with my friend.
4. I want to get good score in my test.
>>I want to get a good score in my test.
OR>>I want to get good scores in my test.
5. I want try eating 엽기 떡볶이.
>>I want to try eating a different kind of Tteokbokki.
There are also other many things I want to accomplish.
>>There are many other things I want to accomplish.
OR>>There are other things I want to accomplish.
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