I want to accomplish my English speaking skill.
학생이 쓴 원문
I rode a motorcycle.
The wind is blowing roughly.
And birds are flying along the wind.
I want to accomplish all my task.
It will soon be a lunar new year\'s day.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, [이름]. I appreciate your effort in doing your homework. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.^_^
I rode a motorcycle.
>>> CORRECT!
The wind is blowing roughly.
The wind is blowing roughly.
>>>The wind was blowing roughly.
And birds are flying along the wind.
And birds are flying along the wind.
>>> And birds were flying along with the wind.
I want to accomplish all my task.
I want to accomplish all my task.
>>> I want to accomplish all my tasks.
It will soon be a lunar new year\'s day.
It will soon be a lunar new year\'s day.
>>> It will soon be Lunar New Year\'s day.
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