I want to be a English master.

2014-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello. My name is [이름]-[이름]. I'm worker at Hyundai account. I designed vehicle's door panel at japan 2004-2013. Now, I'm back to korea and want to be hired an American company that design the door locking systems. I'm glad to know Power English and teacher Mrs.(?) Lexi. I will leran English very earnestly and you are not disappointed of me. Let's talk again.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]! Thanks for taking time to accomplished this. So far, you\'re doing good so I want you to be more confident when speaking. Yap, I would love to talk to you again tomorrow! See yeah! :) Teacher Lexi Here are some of my corrections: Hello. >>Correct OR: Hello!My name is [이름]-[이름]. >>Correct !I\'m worker at Hyundai account. >>I\'m a worker at Hyundai account. OR: I work for a Hyundai account.I designed vehicle\'s door panel at japan 2004-2013. >>I designed vehicle\'s door panel in Japan backn in 2004 to 2013.Now, I\'m back to korea and want to be hired an American company that design the door locking systems. >>Now, I\'m back to Korea and want to hired in an American company that design door locking systems.I\'m glad to know Power English and teacher Mrs.(?) Lexi. >>Correct! (hmmm!!^^)I will leran English very earnestly and you are not disappointed of me. >>I will earnestly learn English  so please don\'t be disappointed.Let\'s talk again. >>Correct ^_^)

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