I want to be a English master.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.
My name is [이름]-[이름].
I'm worker at Hyundai account.
I designed vehicle's door panel at japan 2004-2013.
Now, I'm back to korea and want to be hired an American company that design the door locking systems.
I'm glad to know Power English and teacher Mrs.(?) Lexi.
I will leran English very earnestly and you are not disappointed of me.
Let's talk again.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Thanks for taking time to accomplished this.
So far, you\'re doing good so I want you to be more confident when speaking.
Yap, I would love to talk to you again tomorrow!
See yeah! :)
Teacher Lexi
Here are some of my corrections:
Hello.
>>Correct
OR: Hello!My name is [이름]-[이름].
>>Correct !I\'m worker at Hyundai account.
>>I\'m a worker at Hyundai account.
OR: I work for a Hyundai account.I designed vehicle\'s door panel at japan 2004-2013.
>>I designed vehicle\'s door panel in Japan backn in 2004 to 2013.Now, I\'m back to korea and want to be hired an American company that design the door locking systems.
>>Now, I\'m back to Korea and want to hired in an American company that design door locking systems.I\'m glad to know Power English and teacher Mrs.(?) Lexi.
>>Correct! (hmmm!!^^)I will leran English very earnestly and you are not disappointed of me.
>>I will earnestly learn English so please don\'t be disappointed.Let\'s talk again.
>>Correct ^_^)
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.