I want to be free~!
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. How much spare time do you have every day? How do you like to enjoy your spare time?
A. I have 3 hours of free time. I usually enjoy surfing the web when I get home from work. And I like to read a web novel in free time. I\'m so sad that my free time is too short. I often fall asleep while reading a novel. I hope every day is a holiday.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for still taking the time to do your homework.
The sentences you used were right on point.
They are direct and most are grammatically correct.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have 3 hours of free time.
>> Correct
I usually enjoy surfing the web when I get home from work.
>> Correct
And I like to read a web novel in free time.
>> I also like to read web novels during my free time.
I\'m so sad that my free time is too short.
>> Correct
I often fall asleep while reading a novel.
>> Correct
I hope every day is a holiday.
>> Correct
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