I want to be identified as ...

2021-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 James

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I want to be identified as a kind and helpful person. The reason why I am here now is to help someone. I think. It is very meaningful that I can help someone and make them happy. I saw many people who are in danger and who didn\'t give much love. I don\'t think I received much love from my parents or friends, but I got a lot of help from others. I was given many books from many teachers when I was in school. I was given many tips from my supervisor when I worked at the cafe and restaurants as part-time job. And I was given plenty of love by my step-father and learned how much satisfaction and love I can feel when I give to someone. and the job which I am doing now is very meaningful for me because I can give them what I have. while I see them improve their ability to speak or English, I\'m very proud of myself. And I wanna be remember as a good and passionate teacher who was very sincere to them.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Juliet! Thank you so much for your thoughts regarding this topics. I appreciate it. 
Sincerely
T. James
I want to be identified as a kind and helpful person.
>>> CORRECT
The reason why I am here now is to help someone. I think.
>>>  I think, the reason why I am here now is to help someone.
It is very meaningful that I can help someone and make them happy.
>>> CORRECT
I saw many people who are in danger and who didn\'t give much love.
>>> CORRECT
I don\'t think I received much love from my parents or friends, but I got a lot of help from others.
>>> CORRECT
I was given many books from many teachers when I was in school.
>>> I was given many books by many teachers when I was in school.
I was given many tips from my supervisor when I worked at the cafe and restaurants as part-time job.
>>> I was given many tips from my supervisor when I worked at the cafe and restaurants as a part-time job.
And I was given plenty of love by my step-father and learned how much satisfaction and love I can feel when I give to someone.
>>> CORRECT
and the job which I am doing now is very meaningful for me because I can give them what I have.
>>> The job which I am doing now is very meaningful for me because I can give them what I have.
while I see them improve their ability to speak or English, I\'m very proud of myself.
And I wanna be remember as a good and passionate teacher who was very sincere to them.
>>> And I wanna be remembered as a good and passionate teacher who was very sincere to them.
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