I want to be pretty
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Hi Da [이름],
It\'s totally understandable to want to feel pretty and create a positive environment around you. Taking pride in your appearance, like appreciating your hair, is great. Remember, your uniqueness makes you stand out in your own beautiful way.
~Teacher Cathy
I want to be pretty among pretty and smart things.
>>I aspire to be both attractive and intelligent among beautiful and smart things.
I think being smart is good for creating an environment where I can live more wisely and comfortably in the world, and being pretty is good for creating an environment where I can live in harmony with my surroundings.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Being intelligent is beneficial for establishing a wise and comfortable life in the world while being attractive contributes to creating an environment of harmony with my surroundings.
I like both, but I want pretty because I think my hair is good enough to live in the world.
>>I appreciate both qualities, but I prefer attractiveness because I believe my hair is sufficient to navigate through the world.
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