I want to buy new clothes.
학생이 쓴 원문
Autumn is in the air.
There are many beautiful clothes in the mall.
If I have money I would buy a lot of things, clothes and jewerly.
At a time like this, I wish I were a man.
Because they need not many clothes, bags and shoes.
They are stylish. They have but to be dress neatly.
What can I do?
My boy friend is generous about buying my stuff.
He always told me "you can get better one. How about this one?"
Although I am appreciate all about that. I want to buy some clothes
by my money .
Maybe it is a matter of my pride.
I want to have a ability of a wealthy.
So I'll work diligently. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! You told me before about your boyfriend being so generous. Well I guess he loves you so much that뭩 why. You are right. It뭩 a matter of pride. Sometimes we wanted buy things using our money which we earned with our own sweat. Maybe try to talk about it with your boyfriend and explain to him why sometimes you feel sad about him buying you things. Let him understand. Anyways I hope you will be accepted with the part time job that you mentioned before. Have a great weekend!!!Lei J
Autumn is in the air. >>correctThere are many beautiful clothes in the mall.>>correctIf I have money I would buy a lot of things, clothes and jewerly.>>correctAt a time like this, I wish I were a man.>>correctBecause they need not many clothes, bags and shoes. >>correct
>>Because they don't need to buy new clothes, bags and shoesThey are stylish. They have but to be dressed neatly.>>correctWhat can I do? >>correctMy boyfriend is generous about buying my stuff.>>correctHe always told me "you can a get better one. How about this one?">>correctAlthough I am appreciate all about that. I want to buy some clothes by my money .>>Although I appreciate it, I want to buy my clothes using my own moneyMaybe it is a matter of my pride.>>correctI want to have a ability of a wealthy.>>I want to be wealthySo I'll work diligently. ^^
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