I want to change my face alike jenny
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Hello teacher! Starting today, I will do my homework sincerely:) I want to change my face alike Blackpink Jenny. Because my favorite singer is she! I want to cat face! She is so cute and pretty♡
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Hi [이름]!
I love the details you included in your work.
It actually made the composition smoother and more comprehensive.
Keep it up!^ ^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want to change my face alike Blackpink Jenny.
>> I want to change my face to look like Blackpink Jennie.
Because my favorite singer is she!
>> It\'s because she is my favorite singer!
I want to cat face!
>> I want to have her catlike look.
She is so cute and pretty.
>> Correct
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