I want to do the diving under sea
학생이 쓴 원문
I remembered the beautiful under sea that I have ever seen in cebu
I was just doing the snorkel so that I was thinking if I can go to more down into the sea
but I can not do diving that the diving is to need a skill and learning of diving
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework and once again, for sharing your experiences. It must have been awesome to go underwater and have that feeling of being in a different world. I\'m sorry you cannot travel to the Philippines yet but maybe, soon, you will. Good luck. Have a good night until our next class. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
I want to do the diving under sea
>>> I want to go diving under the sea.
I remembered the beautiful under sea that I have ever seen in Cebu
>>> I remember the most beautiful coral reef I have ever seen in Cebu.
I was just doing the snorkel so that I was thinking if I can go to more down into the sea
>>> I was just snorkeling when I thought of going deeper underwater.
but I can not do diving that the diving is to need a skill and learning of diving
>>> But I cannot dive deeper because it needs a lot of skill for diving.
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