I want to get a new job.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am sick of my job. It's a little boring
All I had to do was answering phones yesterday.
I can more complicated work and want it.
How about you?
Are you satisfied with your job?
When I was a student I dream I got the special job.
I believe I am talented and inteligent.
But not now, I am truly ordinary woman scared about harsh realities.
I lost competition all the time.
Maybe I am not suited this compettitive society.
How can I found what I need?
How about your boyfreind? Does he like your current job?
If I consider my marriage I have to stay here.
But If I want more improved myself I cannot but search another job.
It's difficult because my choice will make my future better or worse.
Hurray~~!!! Women of a marriageable age!! Cheer up~!!
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! I know you are having a dilemma right now. But try to weigh things first before you make a decision. Try to prioritize which one you like to do or have more because every decision that we make now will have a great impact to our future. Just think about it. To answer your question, yes my boyfriend likes my current job better than the previous one because I have fixed day off and schedule and of course it is less stressful for me. Cheer up girl!!! I hope you will be able to find answers to your questions soon.
Lei J
I am sick of my job.
>>correct
It's a little boring>>correct
All I had to do was answering phones yesterday.>>All I have to do is to answer phone calls everyday
I can more complicated work and want it.>>I want a more complicated work
>>I can manage complicated work and I want it
How about you?>>correct
Are you satisfied with your job?>>correct
When I was a student I dream I got the special job.>>I dream of having a special job when I was a student.
I believe I am talented and intelligent.>>correct
But not now, I am truly an ordinary woman scared about harsh realities.>>correct
I lost competitions all the time.>>correct
Maybe I am not suited this compettitive society.>>Maybe I am not suited in this competitive society
How can I found what I need?>>How can I find what I need?
How about your boyfreind? Does he like your current job?>>correct
If I consider my marriage I have to stay here.>>correct
But If I want more improved myself I cannot but search another job.>>But if I want to improve myself I can뭪 stay where I am an dI need to search for a new job
It's difficult because my choice will make my future better or worse.>>correct
Hurray~~!!! Women of a marriageable age!! Cheer up~!!
>>correct
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