I want to go abroad by motor cycle.

I want to go abroad by motorcycle. In the past, A movie was released, It's name was motor cycle diary. I didn't watch it, but After that point, I'm dreaming of travelling with motor cycle. To Korean people, It is impossible to go abroad with car or motor cycle, because of the North Korea. I don't know much about North Korea, It have not enough road to go another city. I heard a new about their life. The rich are living in their capital, PyengYang. but other people are living in country where electronic is not generated in night time. Anyway, I want to go China, India and Russia. If there are any chances to go futher, I want to go Turkey and Europe. But I don't want to go south of Italy. According to the natives, there are lot's of gangster called mapia. I don't want to meet them. kk.. and I want to go Africa too. I want to see rhino. To achieve this dream, first of all, I have to earn lots of money.

Hello there! Good morning.

You did a very good job in writing a very interesting composition. You stated your thoughts clearly but there are just some minor grammar corrections that you need to go over. 

I really enjoyed reading this. It made me want to travel around in a motorcycle too. I imagine it will be quite an adventure. It will be more fun if you travel with friends or maybe a girlfriend, don\'t you think? ^^ I wish one day you can make this dream come true. Work hard so you can earn lots of money for these trips.^^ 

Have a good day.

T. Nina^^

I want to go abroad by motorcycle.

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In the past, A movie was released, It\'s name was motor cycle diary.

>>In the past, a movie called \"Motorcycle Diary\" was released.
I didn\'t watch it, but After that point, I\'m dreaming of travelling with motor cycle.

>>I didn\'t watch it, but after that point, I\'ve been dreaming of traveling by motorcycle.
To Korean people, It is impossible to go abroad with car or motor cycle, because of the North Korea.

>>For Korean people, it is impossible to go abroad via car or motorcycle because of North Korea. 
I don\'t know much about North Korea, It have not enough road to go another city.

>>I don\'t know much about North Korea, but I know it does not have enough road to other cities.  
I heard a new about their life.

>>I heard news about their life.
The rich are living in their capital, PyengYang. but other people are living in
country where electronic is not generated in night time.

>>The rich live in their capital, Pyongyang, while the other people live in parts of the country where electricity is not generated at night.
Anyway, I want to go China, India and Russia.

>>Anyway, I want to go to China, India, and Russia.
If there are any chances to go futher, I want to go Turkey and Europe.

>>If there are chances to go further, I want to go to Turkey and Europe.
But I don\'t want to go south of Italy.

>>But I don\'t want to go to the Southern part of Italy. 

According to the natives, there are lot\'s of gangster called mapia.

>>According to the natives, there are a lot of gangsters there called \"mafia\".
I don\'t want to meet them. kk..

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and I want to go Africa too.

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OR>> -and I want to visit Africa too.

I want to see rhino.

>>I want to see a rhino.^^
To achieve this dream, first of all, I have to earn lots of money.

>>CORRECT