I want to go another countries
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to egypt next vacation .
Because my boyfriend want to see pyramid that is why i want to egypt with my boyfriend
My boyfriend and me will marry next year then we will go to egypt
강사 첨삭
Hello Sophie!
Thank you for making your first ever homework with me. I appreciate your effort. Keep up the good work!
~~Teacher Kate
1. I want to egypt next vacation .Because my boyfriend want to see pyramid
>>>I want to go to Egypt on my next vacation because my boyfriend wants to see the pyramids.
2. that is why i want to egypt with my boyfriend
>>>That is why I want to go to Egypt with my boyfriend.
3. My boyfriend and me will marry next year then we will go to Egypt.
>>>My boyfriend and I will get married next year. Then, we will go to Egypt.
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