I want to go back to past
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to have skill that can go back to past. Going back to past can help many things. In the past, I made lots of mistakes. I can replace that mistakes so there will be only good memories for me. So I think going to the past is better than going to future. (I can\'t think the title of diary. I\'ll write diary longer tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daniel! Your answer is interesting. Good job! However, focus on articles please.
- Teacher Debbie
>> I would like to go back to the past.
Going back to past can help many things.
>> Going back to the past would help me with many things.
In the past, I made lots of mistakes.
>> This is a good sentence.
I can replace that mistakes so there will be only good memories for me.
>> If I could time travel, I would undo those mistakes, so there would only be good memories for me.
So I think going to the past is better than going to future.
>> Moreover, I think going to the past would be better than going to the future.
(I can\'t think the title of diary. I\'ll write diary longer tomorrow.
>> I can\'t think of a diary entry. I\'ll write one tomorrow.
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