I want to go on a broadway!

2022-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I am very rich person, I\'ll go to the next vacation on broadway. And I\'m going to watch all the musicals on Broadway. Musical ticket is very expensive. VIP seats are even more expensive. But if I have a lot of money I don\'t need to think that problem anymore:)

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Hi Ann!

That\'s money well-spent!

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If I am very rich person, I\'ll go to the next vacation on broadway.

>> If I am a very rich person, I will go to Broadway for vacation.

And I\'m going to watch all the musicals on Broadway.

>> I am going to watch all the musicals there.

Musical ticket is very expensive.

>> The musical tickets there are very expensive.

VIP seats are even more expensive.

>> The VIP seats are even more expensive.

But if I have a lot of money I don\'t need to think that problem anymore:)

>> But if I have a lot of money, I don\'t need to think of that problem anymore. :)

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