I want to go out

2020-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

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I want to go out with my family If I will go out, I will ride a bike but I don\\\'t want to go out now [today is February 29th] Now time is 12:21 [이름]ates END

강사 첨삭

Aww. I hope the virus will be gone soon. I want you to enjoy all the time you can have with your family. 

I want to go out with my family
>> I want to go out with my family.

If I will go out, I will ride a bike but I don\\\'t want to go out now
>> If I will go out now, I would like to ride a bike. I do not want to go out now though.

[today is February 29th]
>> Today is February 29, 2020.

Now time is 12:21 [이름]ates
>> It is 12:21 now.

END
>> The end. 

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