I want to go to Hawaii!

2019-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to go to Hawaii. Because I think it is right temperature to play. And that temperature is good for my skin safety. It has many interesting things, and I want to go to Hawaii from the past. I will very happy to go to Hawaii.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Happy Monday!

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Please take note of the proper use of modals.

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~~ Teacher Sharon

I want to go to Hawaii.

>> Correct
Because I think it is right temperature to play.

>> This is because this country has the right temperature in order to enjoy outside.
And that temperature is good for my skin safety.

>> It\'s also good to protect my skin.
It has many interesting things, and I want to go to Hawaii from the past.

>> There are many interesting things to see and I have always wanted to go to Hawaii.
I will very happy to go to Hawaii.

>> I will be very happy if I could go to Hawaii.

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