I want to go to the archery field!
학생이 쓴 원문
If I cannot take care of a pet, I want to go out and play with archery. I think I\'ve told you this before, but I\'ve shot an arrow once, and I\'ve shot it against the coolness of it, and I can\'t forget that feel. So I\'ve been begging my mom to go to the archery field. But mom keep saying I can\'t go because of Corona...I\'m not sweating, and I\'m standing still. Right?
I really really want to go to the archery field...I want to feel that popping heart//>
강사 첨삭
Hello Maria!
I think you want to be the next An San of Korea. For now, it is hard to play archery however, when these are all over, you can shoot that arrow like there\'s no tomorrow. So for now, hit your homework bull\'s eye and study the best that you can.
Thank you for making good use of your time!
See you then.
-T. Donna =)
>> If I cannot take care of a pet, I want to go out and play archery.
I think I\'ve told you this before, but I\'ve shot an arrow once, and I\'ve shot it against the coolness of it, and I can\'t forget that feel.
>> I think I\'ve told you this before, but I\'ve shot an arrow once, and I\'ve shot it against the coolness of it, and I can\'t forget that feeling.
So I\'ve been begging my mom to go to the archery field.
>> Correct!
But mom keep saying I can\'t go because of Corona...I\'m not sweating, and I\'m standing still. Right?
>> But mom keeps saying that I can\'t go because of Corona Virus...I\'m not sweating, and I\'m standing still, right?
I really really want to go to the archery field...I want to feel that popping heart.
>> Correct!
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